"Eyes are the windows to the soul"
Eyes are the windows to the soul. When I look in your eyes I see greatness, I see love, I see everything that's good. You make me happy. You make me realize that love really is the key to success. Love makes me happy, which makes me successful. Love gives me the will to do what I'm supposed to.
Sometimes I'm so sad that I think it's O.K. to just leave. But where can I go? Nowhere. So I stay. When I look in your eyes I see greatness, I see love, I see everything that's good. You make me happy. You make me realize that love really is the key to success. Love makes me happy, which makes me successful. You make me stay.
Eyes are the windows to the soul. You say my eyes are beautiful, that they have patterns. They're something you love about me. I disagree - they're just brown- I'm going to take that comment because it might be the last one I ever receive. That's something people should know-- take every comment like it's your last. When I look in your eyes I see greatness, I see love, I see everything that's good. You make me happy. You make me realize love really is the key to success.
Now this song is unfinished, but I believe it is self-explanatory. I think I will let the viewers decide the message of this song. I will not say whether it is right or wrong because there really is no right answer. Everyone is entitled to their own opinions.
HI Ruxandra:
ReplyDeleteNice original song!! Good for you to post something you wrote. I like how you have the chorus - the same phrase over and over but then one sentence after which seems to suggest indecision to leave or stay?? Eyes sometimes do really say it all. I think that last line is key in each section of the song?
Keep writing.
Also liked the Bruno Mars song! I love how he says that the sun and the beautiful things in life will no longer hold its beauty if she leaves. :) Ms. Morton
awwwwwh! thanks Ms. Morton! It means a lot to me whenever you comment :) Thank-you for liking my song and my song choices! (:
ReplyDeleteI will keep looking for the finished song - can you write music as well? :) Ms. Morton
ReplyDeleteYes I can write music, Ms. Morton! :) It's fun! (:
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